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Paragraph (Working with the team to run experiment with our new apparatus, I observed spent a lot of time observing the phenomenon and I analyzed analyzing the data recorded by process controller, put up suggestion on using distilled water in next future experiment. In the last experiment we make under my suggestion, we used distilled water with new flow rate, and successfully made effluent pH last more than twice8 hours. Becasue our experiment last usually takes more than 6 hours, I came to lab very frequently to check the apparatus and the data during this semester.)
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